Atunah's Romance Haus

Well....It's a promising start. I like the idea of it, the world so to speak, the magic. But Harry Harry Harry. Juvenile and clumsy. He comes across more like a child than an adult for some reason. He giggles? Yes giggles. I was told that he grows during the series, so I hope that is true or it could get annoying very fast :)Right now he is like a loveable dork. I also hope the characters are more fleshed out in future books, they seem a bit 2 dimensional at the moment. But its the first in a series and I am always willing to give a break there, as stuff has to be set up. Reading Fool Moon soon.